Songwriters unite!!

Re: Songwriters unite!!

Postby cloudyy » Fri May 07, 2021 8:31 am

heyyo guys ! i made a song , it aint finished yet but here's my progress .
title : feelings ugh


im at the age where im
overreacting
told me to look over there but
i dont see a thing

youre teasing me again
looks like its gonna rain
ye its goin to rain
i just cant stand the pain

whh do i feel like this ?
feelings , ugh
feelings ugh
why are things like this ?
feelings , ugh
feelings ugh


- back story
i was feeling weird and i was overthinking and all . i just couldnt so i wrote that . any ideas ?
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Re: Songwriters unite!!

Postby cloudyy » Fri May 07, 2021 8:32 am

beautiful_bi_queen wrote:UPDATE: it’s currently 2:46 am. i write a killer verse and chorus (rough draft) of “Barbie Doll” let me know what you think.

chorus:
barbie, barbie, barbie doll
paint my face and dye my hair
(wanna look like barbie)
say something about me
i’ll smile and pretend like i don’t care
(wanna be like barbie)
starving myself to be tight as her plastic waist
(look like barbie)
taking medications to have her chest
(barbie)
gettin plastic surgery so i look the best
(barbie)



verse:
thin, thin is all i hear about
diets, diets is all what my friends talk about
perfection, perfection is all what the media is about
looking, looking like i need to drown it out
i know i shouldn’t try to be perfect
i can’t help it when it seems expected
i know i should stop but
how can i when talk about real bodies is neglected?
i know i have curves and i should appreciate them
but how can i when everybody is about thin?
why does the media obsess over photoshopped models?
what kind of world are we living in?
why can’t love be for all body types?
why is there a fixation on one?
why isn’t there love for curvy girls?
have we went back where we begun?


omg .. !! i luv it ! ❤️
i can never write as well as you 👁️ 👄 👁️
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Re: Songwriters unite!!

Postby Cats2021 » Fri May 07, 2021 3:55 pm

am i a maid or am i a girl
expectations always higher this the world
"Do this" "Do that" is all i ever hear
I mean ain't there other people here
just go look in a mirror
You never say "Thank you" or " Could you be a dear"
All i ever do is cater your every whim
If i did't know better i think i would call you grim
your my sister not my mother
i mean what really makes me wonder
is the fact that you grown and bigger
yet i still have to clean your house and make you dinner
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Re: Songwriters unite!!

Postby Cats2021 » Fri May 07, 2021 4:11 pm

its still in progress
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Re: Songwriters unite!!

Postby Idk201976 » Fri May 07, 2021 11:24 pm

Okay I just wrote this as I was thinking a second ago so please don’t judge. God it’s so bad lol. Sorry but when I rant I rhyme way to much.

I walk up and down a mountain everyday
It just seems like the pain never goes away
Everyone think I got it so great
But they don’t see my fake face

I smile and pretend I’m fine
I can’t let you see me cry
I might slip up a time
But that don’t mean I’m gonna die

Please don’t pretend you care
When you were never there
You just popped back in my life
Now we just roll the dice and pretend we’re fine

I can’t deal with this
My life isn’t a bliss
I just want to disappear
So let me make it clear

I may be young but that doesn’t mean
That you can just control me
I’m still running from the trauma
I can’t deal with all this drama

I’m depressed
I’m anxious
Whose fault is that

I run around in my mind
Seems to pass the time
I can’t trust a single person
So my depression worsens

I wish I never let you in
Because now all you ever do is win
I don’t know how much more I can take
Until I finally break

I get up everyday
And try to smile
But I’ve tried in everyway
But I’m not gonna heal for a while

I’m sorry I’m like this
I’m sorry I’m broken
But you did this
I’m not gonna be left unspoken
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Re: Songwriters unite!!

Postby Machsky_yt » Fri May 07, 2021 11:26 pm

It really good
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Re: Songwriters unite!!

Postby PositiveVibes08 » Thu May 13, 2021 3:35 pm

I've literally just started this song called Girls Like You.
And then, on my earbuds, came on the song entitled that by Maroon 5.🙃

So yeah, that was depressing.
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Re: Songwriters unite!!

Postby brookie_cookie » Thu May 13, 2021 3:45 pm

oh gosh! same kind of vibe as their song?

and i was writing a song called “bitter” and the one by kito and fletcher came on so hehe i know how it feels
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Re: Songwriters unite!!

Postby PositiveVibes08 » Thu May 13, 2021 3:47 pm

Not as similar as you might expect, actually.
I was thinking more about how girls like you are unavailable to persons like me.

At least I had my own lyrics. :lol:
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Re: Songwriters unite!!

Postby brookie_cookie » Thu May 13, 2021 3:49 pm

don’t get this part, but lol 😂🤙

haha, i didn’t get any lyrics :)
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