🦋Kit Kat x Sly x Srahjazz96🦋

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Postby Kit kat » Tue Feb 23, 2021 6:28 am

I mean when I said something about it feels odd it could just be something going on with me.
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Postby Slytherin_Songsx » Tue Feb 23, 2021 6:29 am

ooh- i see
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Postby Kit kat » Tue Feb 23, 2021 6:34 am

Yes sorry for the miss-conception.
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Re: 🦋Kit Kat x Sly x Srahjazz96🦋

Postby Slytherin_Songsx » Tue Feb 23, 2021 7:28 am

hey guys we're really close to 100. anyway, aren't you glad Lou is back?? 😆
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Postby Slytherin_Songsx » Tue Feb 23, 2021 7:28 am

- 94 ⭐
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Re: 🦋Kit Kat x Sly x Srahjazz96🦋

Postby Srahjazz96 » Tue Feb 23, 2021 7:57 am

Slytherin_Songsx wrote:CHAPTER ONE: The joining

"Took you long enough, sis," smiled Joseph as his sister appeared. "We were about to start without you."
"As if you will," his sister smirked in response.
Whispers flew around the area. Who was this girl whom Jo called 'sis'?
"Silence!" Joseph demanded. "This," he gestured to his sister, "is my sister. She will be taking over once I am out of this school. You shall call her Josie," Joseph finished.
Josephie smiled. "Pleasure meeting you."


•••••••••
"You what?!" Aria shrieked.
"Chill out! I only agreed to take over, no big deal whatsoever," Josephie replied.
Aria was Josephie's best friend. It was news to her that Josephie had agreed to join the 'Gang'. Aria frowned. 'How could Josie think it's no big deal?' she thought.
Aria stayed silent and continued with her lunch.
"Rii, are you mad?"
Aria shook her head. "More like disappointed."
It was Josephie's turn to frown. "Why?'
"Once you join, you won't leave. You will instead leave me! Your best friend!"
Oh. That was how Aria felt.
Is josie and Josephine the same person

the first chapter 😬 how is it? please tell me where i could change some parts.
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Re: 🦋Kit Kat x Sly x Srahjazz96🦋

Postby Slytherin_Songsx » Tue Feb 23, 2021 9:25 am

yes
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Postby Srahjazz96 » Tue Feb 23, 2021 9:31 am

oh ok
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Re: 🦋Kit Kat x Sly x Srahjazz96🦋

Postby Cats2021 » Tue Feb 23, 2021 11:24 am

Hi. I love your story although try giving the reader more detail about what Josie is taking over and why it is such a big of a deal I am trying that with my story although I am having some problems with that😀
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Re: 🦋Kit Kat x Sly x Srahjazz96🦋

Postby Slytherin_Songsx » Tue Feb 23, 2021 11:33 am

oh yeahh i forgot about that😅 i love your story!
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